Sunday, January 28, 2007

A Flower Story, By Riley, As Told To Elizabeth


What a lovely flower. I wish I could dance with the flowers. I just don't get it! Why can't I dance with the flowers?
The flower spoke and said, "Hello there," with a happy voice. The flower gave lots of kisses. Then the flower puffed a big smile and then its nose popped out and then its eyes popped open and then she danced.
The end.

5 comments:

  1. you are collecting these somewhere other than the 'net for future publication, yes??

    I liked the character development in this one and the sense of contrast...

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  2. The world needs more flower stories.

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  3. She can look at any given picture and tell you a whole story about it. Characters, setting, backstory, motivations, etc. She is amazing! She gets her storytelling ability from her mother.

    Doc

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  4. that is a FABULOUS story! I'll bet no one tells it better!

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